So, as most of you know I'm currently in search of a place to live. I have decided that now is the best time for me to move out, and be on my own in this great big world. Why? Because I know that I have a lot of life lessons to learn about living on my own, and I'd prefer to learn them when I still have my parents around to help me through them. I mean, these lessons won't EVER be easy to get through, but being able to talk to people I trust, that have already gone through them, will definitely make it easier than it would be if I was facing it alone.
Anyways, why the title if this is all about my search for freedom, right?
Well here we go.
Last night I was browsing through places, and came across a complex that had very reasonable prices. I decided to send their leasing department an email and inquire about what they may have available in Mid-August. I was pleased with their quick reply until I actually read the email. Let me note right now: This email is exactly how I received it, except for the red color change in areas that they could have been better.
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5:31 PM (16 hours ago)
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Our
2 bedrooms start out at 500 and go to 650 r 1 bedroom start out at
450 and go to 550 right now we have 2 bedroom available they range 550 625 at
the present time. Come fill out an application bring 30 days proof of income
and a current photo i_d on both of you you can pick up the application at 322
west 65th number 1 the leasing office there is a red n white
sign in front at summer ridge
Now, as you can see, this email has no sentence structure whatsoever. There is one period, and one capital.. makes me wonder if two people didn't work on the same message. Now, onto the 'text lingo' or abbreviations. Seriously? How much longer does it take to type "are" instead of "r," or type out "and" instead of using "n." This just screams unprofessional!
What's the big problem? Well the biggest problem here is that they are in contact with a potential client (me) and their choice of words, and lack of sentence structure make them seem uneducated. They also seem unprofessional, and the last person I would want handling my hard-earned money (my rent) would be uneducated, unprofessional people. Just saying.
So my question is:
Seriously? What is the world coming to?
"Our 2 bedrooms start out at $550 and go to $650. Our 1 bedrooms start out at $450 and go to $550. Right now we have 2 bedrooms available, and they range from $550 to $625. You can come fill out an application. If you do please bring 30 days proof of income and a current photo ID. Because both residents are over 18 years of age, you would both need to fill out an application, these can be picked up at 322 W. 65th St. Number 1, in the leasing office. There is a red and white sign in front, that says Summer Ridge."
There's my 'semi-professional' rendition. I'd be more likely to respond to that email, than the one they sent.
Thanks for reading my rant! Haha.
Talk to you soon!
-Auni